Wishes from deep within
thoughts churning through
reminding each time
a promise that’s true
How I wished to walk
the sands of quiet beaches
step in step; clasped hands
and half folded pants
Oh! those moments
One too many to express
For reasons known best
swept aside, put to rest
Wishes from deep within
thoughts churning through
reminding each time
a promise that’s true.
............. I would be glad if anybody can suggest a title for this poem.............. till then.,, bye.
Monday, January 21, 2008
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Titles that I could think of for your short poem are, "Nostalgia", "Sweet Promise" and "Dreamin".
How do you like 'Lost days' as the title for my short poem.
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